What would love do?

Posted on 7th March 2015 by | 25 Comments

The words of Love in 10 Sentences  just would not stop going round and round in my head as a sort of chant. Encouraged by the the kind words written after yesterday’s post the ten lines seem to have turned themselves into a poem.                                                                   If I don’t share it with you my head will burst!

WHAT WOULD LOVE DO NOW

Ooooooh love!, aaaaaaah love !                                                                                    Kiss and tender nuzzle love                                                                                 Addictive trippy tripping love

What would love do now?

Where are we going love?                                                                                               Over the moon love                                                                                                     Happy, smiley, people love

What would love do now?

Mother and daughter love                                                                                Everlasting Granny’s love                                                                                          Brother to brother love

What would love do now?

Oh no! forbidden love                                                                                                    Shh! don’t tell, hidden love                                                                                      Painful unrequited love

What would love do now?

Very cute puppy love                                                                                                      Love is all around you love                                                                                                  Truly unconditional love

What would love do now?

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I’m new to writing poetry – it seems to have crept up on me when I wasn’t looking. I used to write some verses for myself, in times of teenage angst and relationship break-ups, but they were never out there for others to read. This feels very different!

I’d LOVE to hear what you think of this ode to love. ❤

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25 responses to “What would love do?”

  1. Judy E Martin | 1st February 2017 at 5:43 pm | Reply

    I LOVE your poem, Daffy. It not only does it cover all sorts of love, but it is written in such a fun, upbeat style! 🙂

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  2. willowdot21 | 1st February 2017 at 9:23 am | Reply

    This is beautiful and insightful, I think verse suits you!!🤗

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  3. robbiesinspiration | 1st February 2017 at 9:18 am | Reply

    This is so lovely and unique.

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  4. Ritu | 1st February 2017 at 6:51 am | Reply

    All these different kinds of love, each so important in their own way!

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  5. Vashti Quiroz-Vega | 30th April 2015 at 8:16 pm | Reply

    I think someone’s in-love . . . ❤

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  6. themissiontomars | 16th March 2015 at 5:16 pm | Reply

    Wow… That’s so “lovely” and what will love do? Seems it’s vibrating my nerves too to find the answers what “love will do” Thanks so much for sharing this, defining words through different relations, different phases of life and yet so warm and love-filled..Great!! I wish you keep writing poems, you indeed are a marvelous poetess/poet..in a word..Wow!! 😀
    Ahh!! sorry for late response, i was sick and even so was busy with tedious work, couldn’t come here these days, sorry to have kept you waiting this long.
    Love and hugs 🙂
    Rosalyn

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  7. aranislandgirl | 7th March 2015 at 9:28 pm | Reply

    You have touched on so many different types of love there. My favorite is ‘truly unconditional love’. ❤

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