beauty created
under pressure and time
by earth and by man
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skills honed from a lifetime’s work
more precious than diamonds and pearls
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Ronovan set us the prompt words of DIAMONDS and PEARLS this week for his haiku challenge.
To marry this challenge with our Photo Prompt of WORK was a huge challenge and has taken me a while to get there. Go to Cathy’s Post to see more entries and leave a link to your ‘WORK’ photo.
I found it difficult to convey what I wanted to in the 5/7/5 haiku, a few more syllables were needed and so I have written a tanka this week. It does not perfectly fit the ‘rules’ but …
The sentiment is that beauty created by human endeavour and skill is more precious to me than diamonds.
The photo was taken in Mr. Hiroshi Murase’s shop in Arimatsu where we did our tie-dying workshop on my trip to Japan last November. They are preparing the cloth for dying by tying it in intricate patterns.
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Miss E (8) saw me struggling with this challenge and wanted to write a poem using Ron’s prompt words – she wrote:
diamonds and pearls
diamonds and pearls
how lovely they can be
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diamonds and pearls
diamonds and pearls
they form in the sea
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diamonds and pearls
diamonds and pearls
they form under the ground
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diamonds and pearls
diamonds and pearls
all waiting to be found
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this is my poem I hope you like it
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Next Week’s Photo Prompt is
LAYER
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